Visually and stylistically this is SO tight, some real amazing shit right here. My biggest critique is the audio, especially with the dialogue it was very difficult to make out what was being said. That’s a big issue when the story is so dependent on the opening conversation. I’d work on that but also suggest you play further into your strengths. I think you could’ve used more visual cues and exaggerated acting choices to convey conversation and how the characters felt. This some real impressive stuff tho— keep it up I’m excited to see what more you’ve got cookin for the future !!